这次要跟大家分享的是Part2中的一个话题：Describe an occasion when you helped others.说一个你帮助别人的话题。

　　值得一提的是，杨老师在给大家作介绍的部分用了:by the way；it’s worth doing sth.；here we go

　　这几个高分词组进行衔接过度，同学们不妨学习起来。

　　现在进入正文时间，录音原文如下，让我们一起来好好解析。

　　原文详解

　　Describe an occasion when you helped others.

  In terms of an occasion when I helped someone, what occurred to me is that I once helped some people in need in a volunteer activity when I studied in my junior middle school. Well, it was about more than six years ago when I helped some children in the earthquake.

　　也许烤鸭们你们在日常生活中没有诸如做志愿者/帮助地震受灾人群这种看起来很“宏大”的事情，没有关系，雅思考试中关注的是你的表达能力，因此把句型和词组记牢，然后套用到你自己的经历中就好啦~

　　高分词组：in terms of；occurred to sb.

  At that time, our school heard the news that Sichuan of China witnessed a serious earthquake and people in Sichuan suffered a lot in this earthquake. Therefore, the school organized a volunteer activity immediately. And from this chance, I could choose a pen pal from Sichuan to communicate with each other via writing letters or emails. This activity aimed at helping to improve the mental health of students in the disaster. After we wrote letters to the pen pals, some of the students in disaster recovered a lot psychologically/mentally. Meanwhile, I also helped them by raising some money, clothes and books for those students in need.

　　这段稍长，主要是对自己当时究竟“怎么帮，做了什么”进行叙述。还记得我们之前在参观大学的口语范例中跟大家分享过，在自己的能力范围内，开头结尾要精彩，而中间段落不犯小错就可以了吗？这就是又一次的证明，大家记住哦~

　　高分词组：at that time；from this chance；aim at doing sth.

  This experience of helping others was not only to help those students from Sichuan but also made me more helpful after I knew that the receivers felt grateful for what we had done. So in my opinion, this was also a kind of help for me. That’s something about the most impressive thing that I helped other with.

　　虽然这部分的结尾段并没有什么非常高级或复杂的词汇，但用了从句+定语后置，一秒提升自己的综合实力，在考官面前说出这段的时候感觉自带气场快接近满级了！

　　重点

　　现在再次为大家总结一下，很多时候雅思的口语和作文并不一定是要让大家拼词汇，关键点反而在于你能否进行逻辑清晰的表达，尤其开头和结尾段落，在保证开场简洁明了，结尾适当升华主题的基础下能够适当进行高分词汇的“画龙点睛”就可以啦！

　　所以现在再次为大家总结一下，很多时候雅思的口语和作文并不一定是要让大家拼词汇，关键点反而在于你能否进行逻辑清晰的表达，尤其开头和结尾段落，在保证开场简洁明了，结尾适当升华主题的基础下能够适当进行高分词汇的“画龙点睛”就可以啦！