2016-12-27 | 小编:Eileen | 4 |
雅思口语考试是众多考生较头疼的项目,原因不仅仅是因为词汇及语言结构的缺乏,发音的欠缺,其中最主要的原因还有思维逻辑的局限性。此文南通环球教育(原环球教育)陈羽静老师将以“Part 2 topic: Describe one time when weather changed your plan”为例子,简析教学过程中可以示范的简单思路。
审题:题目中有这样几个关键词,我们将其提炼出来:
Weather, change, plan; 这三个关键词在我们的口语叙述中将成为描述的重点,除了突出plan与天气的转变,心情的转变也该成为描述的重点,因为细节描述可以提高素材的真实感。
Once, I planned to pick up cherries with my friends in the morning.(一句话交代清楚时间,地点,人物事情) It was a sunny day (天气转变前)and I decided to drive to the yard庄园where we can enjoy the gorgeous view and fresh air. I was thrilled(心情描述) to that trip since I had been working on my assignments for the whole month.
When I was on my way there, it suddenly突然 began to rain heavily.(天气转变后) It was unbelievably windy刮风的 and I could not even drive. I pulled my car near the street在街边停车 and called my friend. I yelled at him and blamed him (情绪的细节描述)for not checking weather reports. Finally, He said the plan was cancelled and we decided to play cards indoor. I was very frustrated/disappointed失望的,沮丧的and went back home. Eventually, my friends and I played cards打牌 at home. (Plan We still enjoyed ourselves very much. But next time, I will check weather reports查看天气预报 before planning any outdoor activities户外运动.
此篇范稿很好的展示了如何将叙事与情绪的转变紧密的联合,同时也暗示了雅思口语最重要的逻辑性,而思维的清晰直接的通过逻辑连词表现出来例如:eventually, finally等。
由此可见,在口语的四项评分标准(FVGP)中,fluency and coherence占了很大的比重,当思维流畅,逻辑健全时,考生便不会“无话可说”,与考官进行具有一定深度的交流,在叙事时也会更有目的的整理出故事的时间线。